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Why am I not pretty enough?
just like you always said
now everyday at lunch is when
the toilet is my best friend.

Why am I not wanted enough?
it's written across my arms
the way you ignore me makes me feel like
the scars do more help than harm.

Why am I not good enough?
I gave you everything plus my heart
but still you pushed, used and broke me
and left my heart in shards.

Why am I not loud enough?
for you to finally see
that deep inside my bleeding heart I realize
that you're not good enough for me.
©2007-2009 ~immortalnight
:iconimmortalnight:

Author's Comments

It's not the best in the world but I like it still.

For people who are obsessed with pleasing others (in an unhealthy way), nothing that anyone, anywhere says about you. NO ONE can ever tell you that you are unbeautiful, not smart enough, not good enough. If there is a friend or bf/gf that won't except you just the way that you are, then that person is definitely NOT good enough for YOU!
=)

Don't be harsh with any comments please.
I'm planning on adding another stanza between the 2nd and 3rd someday because it's too short!!! =[

Edited: Aug. 6, 2008

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:iconem0paranoic:
I luv it...in a different way...but I just read some ofmy feeligns in ur poem
:iconliquidblueeyes:
I think you've expressed yourself well...

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:iconpyrox666xpheebs:
:hug: So beautiful :(

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i really love this, mostly because it reminds me of me. Yeah i know thats kinda selfish but anyway this poem is really great keep up the good work. thank you for this.

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When you see a little kid drop his ice cream on the street
do you...
laugh?
cry?
Or wish you were a kid again,
when that was the worst of you problems?
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no, it's not selfish..
I wrote this poem because it sorta was to remind me.. about that.
oO

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